The Preacher is the second novel in Läckberg’s
Fjällbacka-series. The Swedish original was published as Predikanten in 2004. The series began with Isprinsessan in 2003; (English The
Ice Princess in 2008) and the latest, ninth novel called Lejontämjaren (literally The Lion Tamer) was published in 2014 (English The Ice Child in 2016). The books were made into a television
series in 2012. Camilla Läckberg (1974- ) has also published stand-alone
novels, cook books and a series of children’s books inspired by her third child.
Fjällbacka is a beautiful, old Swedish fishing village with
narrow cobbled streets and colourful, wooden houses. It is making most of its
fame as the place where Camilla Läckberg grew up and where she chose to set her
crime novels. For 150 Swedish Krona you can join a “Camilla Läckberg Murder
Mystery Tour.” Fjällbacka’s other claim to fame is Ingrid Bergman's visit there
in 1957. The Fjällbacka Welcome-brochure for 2016 has the two glamorous women on its cover.
In the
Fjällbacka-series, writer Erica Falck and police officer Patrik Hedström
fall in love, get married and start a family. Domesticity and murder exist side
by side. Patrik kisses Erica’s
baby-bump: “Be nice to Mamma, and I’ll be home soon.” (p4) as he heads off to
investigate a woman’s body found in a crevice of a rocky outcrop. Beneath it,
lie two other, much older, bodies. Patrik goes to work and the heavily pregnant
Erica stays at home dealing with unwelcome summer visitors (pp.18, 28, 45, 51,
80, 233,256, 291).
The English paperback version of The Preacher carries an endorsement from Literary Review: “Chilly, deceptive and lucid, just like the icy
environment it describes.” This novel is set in the middle of a July heatwave,
where the police go to work in shorts (pp22, 112), fans whir (p283) and
tourists sun-bathe (p211). Regardless of the reviewer’s opinion on the novel,
please note that Nordic countries do have summers, too; they are not icy year
round.
The murders in
The Preacher are gruesome and cruel,
the agony of victims’ families is deep and bitter, and Erica and Patrik
maintain their bubble of cosy co-habitation (pp45, 142, 151, 201) “curled up on
the sofa together” (p112), “fixing” a hot chocolate (p109) or “fixing” “something
special for dinner (p45).
This contrast
between the main characters’ contented domesticity and the homicidal horror
outside their home is central to Läckberg’s fictional world. Her hero is
well-adjusted and happy; as Erica congratulates herself: “At least she
had chosen the right father for the child … His steadfast calm and confidence
offset her own restlessness” (p142). “Patrik was basically an optimist.” (p201) There
are no signs of the traditional detective hero's drunken, guilt-ridden Angst in
Patrik Hedström. This is refreshingly different among the usual emotionally
damaged detectives in fiction. It also means that Patrik suffers from the
complaint of all thoroughly good fictional heroes: he is the dullest character
in the book. At least we have, for once, a detective hero with a
reasonably-sized ego.
Although the
murders in The Preacher are
ultimately solved through forensic analysis, the focus and interest in the tale
is in understanding family dynamics and individual psychology. The
investigation centres on three generations of the Hult family: “Wherever we
turn, we run into the Hult family.” (p273) and proceeds by a gradual uncovering
of family members’ inner workings and motivations.
Läckberg
offers a portrait of a community with simple psychology. There is an assumption
that the values displayed by the narrator are shared by the reader. This is
evident in the way humour is based entirely on making fun of selfish, lazy, self-important
characters (pp.35, 79, 150-1, 214, 219, 233).
The most powerful force in the
community is not the fear of law and order but of social shame and judgment by
one’s peers. Social pressures dominate people’s lives, whether it is Erica who
cannot refuse her guests: “hospitality was like a natural law” (p233; also p78)
or Johannes Hult’s family: “For twenty-four years the town had discredited
their family, but now everyone else would feel the shame.” (p107)
An unkempt,
overweight woman weeps after her lost youthful beauty (p16) and an insecure
woman chooses a safe marriage over a passionate affair (p330). These
characters, as well as ambitious social climbers, alpha-male police
officers, pompous paterfamilias and rebellious teenagers, are saved from being
cardboard stereotypes by the author’s (if not the narrator’s) sympathy for
them. They are all depicted with a degree of warmth and fondness and they have
human qualities we recognize.
While the
psychology of the crime is sound in Läckberg’s plotting, there are
very clumsy clues in the detective tale. A DNA analysis of semen on one of the
victims helps to narrow down the list of suspects (p293, also p396). Why there
should be semen on the victim is a mystery; there is no indication that the
murderer had any sexual motivation. Patrik discovers a notebook with a full
confession by the culprit in a secret compartment of a desk: “Having never
missed a single episode of Antiques
Roadshow on TV, his thoughts turned naturally to secret compartments when
he looked at the old piece of furniture.” (p389) There is no indication in
the story previously that this notebook exists. Lucky Patrik!
In an
atrociously translated section of her English web page, Läckberg gives advice on
crime writing and recommends plot devices for creating “excitement.” Läckberg
uses a couple of them well to pace her story: “changing the external
environment” (i.e. changes in the setting) and “replacing internal environment”
(i.e. changes in the narrative point of view). But there are severe problems
with a couple of other techniques she recommends. In The Preacher, there are
several points where we are told that a character has an idea or information
important to the case, but it is not revealed to the reader (pp21, 92-3, 203, 255,
317, 357, 373). Läckberg calls this technique either “making suggestions”
(giving the reader an indication or a partial truth) or “cliffhangers.” On her
website she gives two examples of cliffhangers from The Preacher.
The first example
is an awaited call from the forensics team: “But never in Patrik’s wildest
imagination could he have predicted what he heard next.” (p357) This sets up
high expectations in the reader. In the next chapter we learn that what Patrik
"heard next" was that there was no DNA match (p365) with any of the suspects. While
this is very disappointing for the detective, this result was hardly beyond his
“wildest imagination.” The heightened expectation is not matched with the
following revelation.
The second
example is the end of a scene with parents waiting for news about their missing
daughter: “Patrik had an icy feeling in his stomach that… they might be waiting
in vain. Somebody had picked up Jenny. Somebody who did not have good
intentions.” (pp165-6). If a girl goes missing in a crime novel, it is
quite reasonable for the detective to fear that she has become a victim
of a crime. Here the expectation is too low and predictable for this ending to be called a cliffhanger.
The use of “suggestions”
and “cliffhangers” in The Preacher is awkward: it is obvious that the author is trying to increase
suspense by leaving the reader hanging. Läckberg struggles to get the set-up
(the cliffhanger or the suggestion) to match the revelation that follows; every
failure to do this creates a little jolt of disappointment for the reader.
The Preacher has workmanlike plotting. It has
consistent and realistically mundane characters. Creating believable characters
is Läckberg’s strong point. She has
a very easy-going style. Her language has few embellishments; no metaphors, few adverbs. Läckberg tells the story without any
visible philosophical or political message. This makes her novel very easy to
digest. On her website Läckberg makes the point that there
is no magic in crime writing; “Every man” can do it (the Swedish original means
“every one” can do it – it is a very bad translation). She is right, but she
also underestimates her own effort. Läckberg’s novels are good examples of
proficient story-telling in all its simplicity.
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